To: Cadet Amara Smith From: Admiral Christopher Pike Subj: Field Training Log Comments--Confidential *** Cadet,
Allow me to address some of the points you brought up. 1. You did not "keep the crap to a minimum". 2. I was the idiot who thought you should get this position. 3. If you want a theme, that's fine. Be sure it follows your theme. 4. You need to improve your social skills, perhaps you should aspire to be a little more like the person that wrote this log, it wouldn't be such an issue for you. 5. You need friends out here, to quote something from a few hundred years ago, "In space, no one can hear you scream." 6. I'm glad you found a hobby. 7. I do not need to hear about your personal endeavors with Lieutenant Commander Giotto. I would like to avoid being implicated in future sexual harassment suits. 8. I am sorry about the nightmares. 9. Have a little more faith in your abilities. You can do this. If I thought otherwise, this idiot would not have requested your field training here. 10. Get some sleep. Yes, that is an order. I'm sure Dr. McCoy would have no issues confining you to quarters if need be.
This was a...very personal log. But not bad for a first time out. So, I think a B is fair.
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From: Admiral Christopher Pike
Subj: Field Training Log Comments--Confidential
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Cadet,
Allow me to address some of the points you brought up.
1. You did not "keep the crap to a minimum".
2. I was the idiot who thought you should get this position.
3. If you want a theme, that's fine. Be sure it follows your theme.
4. You need to improve your social skills, perhaps you should aspire to be a little more like the person that wrote this log, it wouldn't be such an issue for you.
5. You need friends out here, to quote something from a few hundred years ago, "In space, no one can hear you scream."
6. I'm glad you found a hobby.
7. I do not need to hear about your personal endeavors with Lieutenant Commander Giotto. I would like to avoid being implicated in future sexual harassment suits.
8. I am sorry about the nightmares.
9. Have a little more faith in your abilities. You can do this. If I thought otherwise, this idiot would not have requested your field training here.
10. Get some sleep. Yes, that is an order. I'm sure Dr. McCoy would have no issues confining you to quarters if need be.
This was a...very personal log. But not bad for a first time out. So, I think a B is fair.
Keep up the good work,
C.R. Pike